Comments on: Garage Door

By: mazzz_in_Leeds

mazzz_in_Leeds — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 10:10:12 +0000

I love the barbed wire round the mind

By: Chadredden

Chadredden — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 23:33:03 +0000

You reminded me of how awkward I feel in crowds, but keep trying to hang in them. Going to change my rsvps for the xmas parties I was planning on trying to go to again.

Great language, everything felt bitter cold.

By: Laura Eno

Laura Eno — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 23:27:09 +0000

The last paragraph makes me exhale a breath that I didn't know I was holding.

By: Carrie Cleaver

Carrie Cleaver — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 23:19:30 +0000

Very flowing and tangible. Nice.

By: chrischartrand

chrischartrand — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 22:26:17 +0000

This swept me up and tumbled me along. The last paragraph is beautiful.

By: Marisa Birns

Marisa Birns — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 21:46:57 +0000

Here one is, placed directly in a stream of consciousness with words that tumble forth not stopped nor hindered by conventional technique.

I must admit that I was taken along and while lost my way a number of times, it was a breathless ride.