Comments on: Dismissed Mingling http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/ A Stripped-Down View - Flash Fiction, Flash Words, Thoughts Fri, 20 May 2011 08:57:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Tony Noland http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-319 Tony Noland Tue, 22 Dec 2009 20:21:04 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-319 This was beautifully written. Even when two people have agreed to stay apart, it's hard to leave everything behind. This was beautifully written. Even when two people have agreed to stay apart, it's hard to leave everything behind.

]]> By: Dana http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-318 Dana Tue, 22 Dec 2009 20:10:00 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-318 Wow, this was excellent. Very sensual and lyrical. One of my favs from this week! Wow, this was excellent. Very sensual and lyrical. One of my favs from this week!

]]> By: Elizabeth Ditty http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-317 Elizabeth Ditty Tue, 22 Dec 2009 18:37:28 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-317 Nice job with this. The emotions are very well presented without being spelled out. Very deftly done. Thanks for sharing it! Nice job with this. The emotions are very well presented without being spelled out. Very deftly done. Thanks for sharing it!

]]> By: webnh http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-316 webnh Tue, 22 Dec 2009 14:31:39 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-316 Hi Lou, thanks for reading the piece and for your comments I look forward to seeing you around here again.... Hi Lou, thanks for reading the piece and for your comments I look forward to seeing you around here again….

]]> By: webnh http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-315 webnh Tue, 22 Dec 2009 14:30:21 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-315 Thanks Deanna, I love tension .... Thanks Deanna, I love tension ….

]]> By: Deanna Schrayer http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-314 Deanna Schrayer Tue, 22 Dec 2009 14:11:18 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-314 Such a poignant story, very nicely written. I could feel the tension, the need, all the way through. Nice job! Such a poignant story, very nicely written. I could feel the tension, the need, all the way through. Nice job!

]]> By: @WeezelWords http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-313 @WeezelWords Mon, 21 Dec 2009 21:01:29 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-313 I absolutely loved this line: "I turn and immediately tumble helplessly into her eyes." I actually feel like I had been there before! Well written! I absolutely loved this line: "I turn and immediately tumble helplessly into her eyes."
I actually feel like I had been there before!
Well written!

]]> By: mazzz_in_Leeds http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-312 mazzz_in_Leeds Mon, 21 Dec 2009 17:15:14 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-312 Beautiful, sad piece. Takes a while for something like that to be *really* over Beautiful, sad piece. Takes a while for something like that to be *really* over

]]> By: Lou http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-309 Lou Sun, 20 Dec 2009 01:49:49 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-309 This is a fantastic piece about the place where there are no words. If only they could stay there, and isn't it frustrating they can't. Well done, especially the choreography of the build-up. I could feel the magnetic force. Looking forward to reading more of your work. This is a fantastic piece about the place where there are no words. If only they could stay there, and isn't it frustrating they can't. Well done, especially the choreography of the build-up. I could feel the magnetic force. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

]]> By: webnh http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-303 webnh Sat, 19 Dec 2009 20:42:42 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-303 Thanks for the comment Jon, the space to write seems lately to get filled with garbage, to breathing again I have to push that garbage to one side and write.... Thanks for the comment Jon, the space to write seems lately to get filled with garbage, to breathing again I have to push that garbage to one side and write….

]]> By: @AlBruno3 http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-308 @AlBruno3 Sat, 19 Dec 2009 19:08:23 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-308 That was terrific. It gave me lumps in all the right places. That was terrific. It gave me lumps in all the right places.

]]> By: webnh http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-306 webnh Sat, 19 Dec 2009 15:47:38 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-306 Karen..glad you stopped over, lust or love? sometimes they can't be peeled apart from one another.... Karen..glad you stopped over, lust or love? sometimes they can't be peeled apart from one another….

]]> By: webnh http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-305 webnh Sat, 19 Dec 2009 15:45:10 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-305 Thanks Shannon for your kind words.... Thanks Shannon for your kind words….

]]> By: webnh http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-304 webnh Sat, 19 Dec 2009 15:44:05 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-304 Chris glad you dropped by and thanks for reading the piece... always glad to see you here.. Chris glad you dropped by and thanks for reading the piece… always glad to see you here..

]]> By: karenfrommentor http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/comment-page-1/#comment-302 karenfrommentor Sat, 19 Dec 2009 15:32:50 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/?p=869#comment-302 Loved this line "dismissed by the other with a turn of the head". Lust? Love? either way...nicely done. Karen :0) Loved this line "dismissed by the other with a turn of the head".

Lust? Love? either way…nicely done.
Karen :0)

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